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Well I just might take too long, and
I just might not be what you expected.
A million and one witty puns, a thousand cigarette burns, and a dozen hollow
Hallmark cards mark your hollow heart.
I want to be left alone.
Away from your acid tongue;
Your accusing eyes and that shit-eating smile.
I'd drown you a hundred times for one night of peace.

Oh, you spiked the punch all right.
You slipped right in my spinning mind,
Bringing lies and will-o’-wisp whispers
Leading me astray as if it were a game;
You left me in this coal pit for the soul, and
Frankly I’m sickened, you twisted bitch.
Which words will you twist to get the
Red off your hands this time?
You can’t hide from me
I see every crack in your porcelain heart.

Replay the scene for all of time,
But I still won't thank you for filling my mind with poison
And my cup with bitter discord.
You were so bright on the horizon,
But now I see that you're a fallen star;
At best, you're Lucifer (but not half as humble)
Swallowing suns whole and spitting up bones.

So here I stand; atop this city,
Above the streets.
Watching insects live their tiny, simple lives;
I envy their mindless days;
My mind burns black, fueled by hate
Darker than pitch; sharper than knives.
I want to give you nerve gas kisses;
Hand grenade hugs.
You will not go unscathed.

I will haunt your dreams.
Visions of terror will dance
Through your tiny mind, in the
Dead black night.
I will tear your sanity out from beneath you;
You will plunge into the abyssal darkness.
And there, in the deepest and darkest corner of your mind, the real hell begins.
That’s when you’ll realize
You’re not alone down there.
Unforsure where he went, and really worried. I hope my sweet baby's okay...

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Zed-of-Venice
Patrick
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United States

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Never sold a single fucking one. But I still hope that someday, someone might be willing to pay a small sum for the pleasure of having my art to display in their own home. *sighs* Someday.

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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks for the Watch! :timeflies: 
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Zed-of-Venice Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
/'''/(OwO)\'''\ No problem

-Sloth
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abcartattack Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Appreciate the watch, thank you! :hug:
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Zed-of-Venice Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. I think your stuff is great.
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Dinzydragon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student
Thanks for awesome badge, here's one for you too
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Kitteh-Pawz Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for adding me to your dA watch! :)
It is very much appreciated! :heart:
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nicostars Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconyaykermitplz:<---------This was me when I noticed that you are watching me!
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Zed-of-Venice Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^
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MadGardens Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave again! :iconfavesmile:
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MadGardens Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave! :iconfavesmile:
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